Final Thesis Statement

Businesses are expanding their use of social media to reach out to the end customer, it’s essential that blogging is the next step to ultimately get feedback on a business’s performance, new product development and other issues pertaining to their respective business.

One comment

  1. The “while” is confusing to me. Are you saying these things are happening simultaneously? Or are you trying to show a compare/contrast relationship? I would really sit down and think of the wording of this sentence. I understand your talking points but don’t really understand the relationship among them.

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